But I`m not dead, even if the thought of us did die;
`Cuz I know, even the best fairy tales sometimes lie.

Drowning in misery, I told my heart to beat;
So that you could stomp it out with heavy feet.

That was a great set of lines as well. I think that the first two lines of your last stanza sounded a tad forced, or maybe it's just that I didn't understand them, but overall the piece was good. Also, thank you very much for all the comments. I appreciate you taking the time to give me an honest critique!
Charisma*
WOW! ^ Nice ending!

This is one of my fav poems by you jenna, the flow was absolutely perfect throughout the whole poem, i wish i could give it a 10/5!!!!