Goodbye

by Alyssa Carroll   Sep 24, 2007


Goodbye daddy
goodbye pain
later to all those
who made me insane

I am so sorry
for letting go
lifes to short
i hardly know

my death toyou
will pass by
you'll live with that burden
that infinitelie

I was in the water
ready to drown
i felt myself
slowly sinking down

your eyes were drifting
and watching me die
you killed me daddy
and pretended to cry

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    That is really good, but on the second to last verse I think you should switch slowly and sinking around so its

    I felt myself slowly,
    sinking down.

    well thats just my opinion its good the other way too. but good overall short and sweet