by dreamer88 Sep 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The wind paints a picture in the sand |
by White Orchid
Hey I am actually the same way with poetry I just let my feelings out, and this poem was just awesome!!!! I loved everything about it and the flow was really good! Also, it tells a story and I love poems that do that cuz it makes them real!! Great job!! :) |
by Kaila
This is great.. its sweet and to the point but at the same time its so intricate.. very very nice job :) |