Comments : Painting a picture in the sand

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is great.. its sweet and to the point but at the same time its so intricate.. very very nice job :)

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Hey I am actually the same way with poetry I just let my feelings out, and this poem was just awesome!!!! I loved everything about it and the flow was really good! Also, it tells a story and I love poems that do that cuz it makes them real!! Great job!! :)