How?

by enigmatic_prey   Sep 24, 2007


How can I tell you
About this feeling for you?
If you always act
As if you do not notice
The LOVE that I have for you....

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Just a short poem I made when I was bored.....

and please go easy on me......

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  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    Heheheheh ang ikli nga......peo ang ganda.....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    The last line doesnt flow to well, but overall the form is excellent...short and sweet, to the point, great work, keep it up

    andrew

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Short and sweet, packed with emotion. great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    I like it! Short and sweet is always good. gets a 5 from me.

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