You did great job with rhymes, and you put a lot of emotions in this piece, expressing them very good.
The choice of words is excellent through the whole piece.
5/5 from me

This is a work to be admired!

"Will you let him change back into my friend.
My one confidant, my trusted brother."

These lines remind me of an old friend who I loved like a brother! 5/5

I loved the lines:
'You twist up his mind while he appears fine.
So cruel and unkind, unfair, but divine.'
Very deep, very poetic. Well done.

I also liked the last part:
'The way innocents are robbed of their sense.
How benevolence is without conscience.
Why life's left to chance and deliverance.
How this prayer won't make any difference...'

I've felt like that before... it sucks, very much. I hope you got through it okay, and I hope your friend has shown improvement. This poem was very well-written, and I look forward to more.
5/5!

Love
Tina