Tragedy/At Night

This is incredible, it's so so good.
Words espressed, emotions, thoughts, it's all there described so well.
It's just exactly how I see the meaning of Tragedy.
I have to add this one to my favourites if you don't mind.

5/5

Thank you for commenting on my work, it's very much appreciated :)

xo angelique

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Wow! Amazing poem!!! Totally powerful! A stunning peice to read! Beatuful flow....keep up the good work!

Wow...this is soooo powerful...it took my breath away. the word choice and the flow was just wonderful! this is a Beautiful piece! keep up the great work! 5/5 of course!

Jenna

Wow, what a powerful piece of poetry. Exellent vocab and word usage all throughout the poem. You provided wonderful imagery, although sad and dark. The flow was flawless as well. Great write. 5/5

marcella

Wow, this one is truly breathtaking... I like everything about it: Wording is great, atmosphere superbly created and the flow really excellent.
My favorite lines are:
-Following..
Unnoticed in the dark.
Slipping through the shadows
and breaking us apart.
Beguiling..
It mystifies the mind.
Cruel manifestations,
its tools to make us blind.-

Well done, you write great poetry!
5/5 from me