Wow, this one is truly breathtaking... I like everything about it: Wording is great, atmosphere superbly created and the flow really excellent.
My favorite lines are:
-Following..
Unnoticed in the dark.
Slipping through the shadows
and breaking us apart.
Beguiling..
It mystifies the mind.
Cruel manifestations,
its tools to make us blind.-

Well done, you write great poetry!
5/5 from me

Wow, what a powerful piece of poetry. Exellent vocab and word usage all throughout the poem. You provided wonderful imagery, although sad and dark. The flow was flawless as well. Great write. 5/5

marcella

Wow...this is soooo powerful...it took my breath away. the word choice and the flow was just wonderful! this is a Beautiful piece! keep up the great work! 5/5 of course!

Jenna

Wow! Amazing poem!!! Totally powerful! A stunning peice to read! Beatuful flow....keep up the good work!

This is incredible, it's so so good.
Words espressed, emotions, thoughts, it's all there described so well.
It's just exactly how I see the meaning of Tragedy.
I have to add this one to my favourites if you don't mind.

5/5

Thank you for commenting on my work, it's very much appreciated :)

xo angelique

take care