by Fixxxer Sep 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
See you looking through me like I'm made of glass. |
Very emotional and greatly written. You managed to create truly unique atmosphere in this piece. I like the ending very much, it's effective, and the choice of words is good through the whole poem. |
The flow was great and i loved the last line..it struck with power. The emotion was definitely felt. Great job and keep it up! |