Good job... but I don't really see the connection between verses.

Well, I can imagine it's not very clear to those who don't know my situation.The poem is about me and my boyfriend,we are having a break at the moment and it's very painful. It don't bothers me if the verses aren't that connected , the only thing that's important to me is expressing how I really feel.But thanks for your comments by the way:)

Heh okay sorry. :D

Heh okay sorry. :D