National Health (No) Service

by Internal Hatred   Sep 24, 2007


Hello, please tell me your name,
And the reason that you came.
Ah, you've cut yourself badly I see,
Could we say a suicide attempt maybe.
Go and wait another four hours,
Whilst your health slowly devours.
No, you've got to wait, it's all routine.
Actually, make it five hours until you'?ll be seen.
Take care, I'll see you next year,
Believe me, you'll still be waiting here.

Before anyone says anything I have to point out that this is based on my local NHS.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Great flow, I really enjoyed it ^^ keep up the great work asomeness! woooooooooooooo!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tinkabella

    Don't worry, it's not just your local NHS. x

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam Stone

    This is so true, it had a great flow as well.

    Sam xx

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Those sons of ****! Health Care Services my arse!

    Totally true.

    Voted 5/5

    -Sam
    [Deathly'Amore]

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    That was very well discribed.. although it was short it said every thing you wanted it to.. amazing really! =)

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