What you do to me

by StillxBreathing   Sep 24, 2007


I've been watching you for a while, boy
And I like what I see
But recently you've been dating my friend
Instead of dating me

What I need to say,
Is that I love you so much
And even though you cant tell
This isn't just a crush

I see you mostly everyday
You make me feel like dirt
Every time I see you kiss her
Why can't you see how much this hurts?

You wonder why I ignore you
You ask why I turn away
But you don't know that when you hug me
Im just praying that you'll stay

So I'm going to stay over here for a while
I'm hoping this doesnt last long
I'm staying on my own side
Until your girlfriend is gone

Why cant you see?
How this makes me feel
I see you kiss her,
But it doesnt seem real.

Don't ask me to be there
Stop saying I'm confusing
I cant be around you
Don't you know what you're doing?

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Good poem. Understandable. I remember i told my best friend that i liked this guy(and me and him where good friends) then they started dating and she didnt tell me until i put the pieces together. i seriosuly hated her for that...and somehow i hated him more.

    victoria

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    I like it..but i think u could make some changes...
    umm
    the first 2 lines are alittle choppy....might want to say sumthin else...

    "So Im going to stay over here for a while
    Im hoping this doesnt last long
    Im staying on my own side
    Until your girlfriend is gone"
    ^^^ u culd say..
    I'm going to stay over here a while,
    hoping this does not last long,
    i'm staying on my own side
    until your girlfriend has gone afar...

    anyways...good job..
    4/5
    ***aLy***

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