I like it..but i think u could make some changes...
umm
the first 2 lines are alittle choppy....might want to say sumthin else...

"So Im going to stay over here for a while
Im hoping this doesnt last long
Im staying on my own side
Until your girlfriend is gone"
^^^ u culd say..
I'm going to stay over here a while,
hoping this does not last long,
i'm staying on my own side
until your girlfriend has gone afar...

anyways...good job..
4/5
***aLy***

Good poem. Understandable. I remember i told my best friend that i liked this guy(and me and him where good friends) then they started dating and she didnt tell me until i put the pieces together. i seriosuly hated her for that...and somehow i hated him more.

victoria