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by Laura Sep 24, 2007 category : Love, romance / desired love
I will always love you But you will never love me You will always love her more And I will have to suffer Through the painful heartache. Love is destroying me Love is breaking me Love is killing me I wish you could be mine But you will never be You will always love her more And I will have to be hurt Through the awful heartache. Love sucks Love stinks Love is killing me I want you to be mine But you will never want me You will always love her more And I will be the one who... Is alone and never loved.
by Stephanie
Aww, that was heartbreaking. You did an amazing job. The emotions were strong & clear, the rhyming didn't feel forced, & the word usage was good. Spectacular job, deary. (: Overall: 5.5 --- Stephanie Lynn .+. && Thx for the comment on my poem. :P