Like a Mirror

by RobinAnn13   Sep 24, 2007


She is like a mirror
She lies to you to keep herself safe
She is like a mirror
She reflects the people around her; smiles, new fashion
She is like a mirror
You see in her what you expect to see
She is like a mirror
She keeps everything locked away, you only see the outside
She is like a mirror
It will only take one painful blow to shatter her

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I loved the usage of similes! great job again! it was flawless!

  • 17 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Ur a great writer!!!!
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
    =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Overall this is a good poem. The thing is that sometimes repitition doesnt work. Your poem has a good but limited content. You can add more variety and flavors to make it better. 4/5 at the moment

    tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

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