Comments : Mysterious Girl of my Dreams

  • Aww ill be ur mstery girl lol!

  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Beautifully written, wonderfully composed, great story, and even better than your last. a definate 5 for 5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    I liked it a lot. It's so sweet, any girl would love to hear it i'm sure, and the 'peanut butter and jam' part gives a bit of a humor to it, which is good sometimes in love note-like poetry because it makes someone happy... and everyone know girls love to laugh!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    I liked it a lot. It's so sweet, any girl would love to hear it i'm sure, and the 'peanut butter and jam' part gives a bit of a humor to it, which is good sometimes in love note-like poetry because it makes someone happy... and everyone know girls love to laugh!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    Aws. that was cute.

  • 16 years ago

    by MELI

    WOW THIS IS NICELY WRITTEN AND I REALLY CAN RELATE =] GOOD JOB KEEP IT UP

  • 5 years ago

    by Minyara Stevenson

    agin with the love its nasty. okkk right about somethin other then love okkk?!