Aw... so sweet <3
nice flow
had me reading every bit with my full attention

^_^ so true every word of it. Dast Xosh

Omg this one was so cute! i loved it!! it's so unique and different, it's amazing i loved it goran. i hope she gets to read this, b/c i know it'll make her feel amazing, and just so loved. it's always a great heartbreak to miss someone you love so dearly, but it's a great joy when they're finally back in your arms again, it makes you feel like all the times you were alone and missing them was completley worth it. i'm happy for you! beautiful poem, keep that pen writing!

Mousie

This poem is different. i like the personification used in this poem. Nice job.<3Emily

Love always make us to do something that our special like and this is a prove.

Now this is what i call a blockbuster... how do you manage to write such epics.... funtastic.... 5/5... kudos....