by Yeka Sep 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Someone told me love will be in us |
by rob
Your feelings really come across on this one.. I especiallylike the ending .. =+) |
It's sweet.. I like it very much yet i don't agree with u on 1thing: u say that love doesn't last, but i believe that love never ends in case it was real love.. Ur a great writer؛‎ ‎keep up with the good work.:) |
by Fluffy
Love it good job |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats a strong ending, this poem is very well written and good language skills. well done x |