Someone told me

by Yeka   Sep 25, 2007


Someone told me love will be in us
But how can that be, look what love give us
Love is like the beating of the heart
But someone had to rip your heart apart
Someone thought that he will be near
But it is not clear
If someone special gives you a smile
But he want to runaway in a mile
Your heart was broken
But you want to be woken
You have to leave everything in the past
Because love doesn't last
He said it will be better
But you know it doesn't really matter
There was a friend
Who help you in the end
She knows a lot of the situation
Because she was in the same relation
A word of unloved is killing
And blood spilling
He gave you a kiss
But no matter how much he miss
Just like his parents separated you
Or just trying to do a favor for you too,
Separated from each other is painful
Even though it is a faithful
Remember the good times in the past
If it does mean you have him in a class
View the places you meet
Even you have to remember when you sleep
Revenge ain't going to cure this pain
Revenge also doesn't mean to cut your vain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by rob

    Your feelings really come across on this one.. I especiallylike the ending .. =+)

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    It's sweet.. I like it very much yet i don't agree with u on 1thing: u say that love doesn't last, but i believe that love never ends in case it was real love.. Ur a great writer؛‎ ‎keep up with the good work.:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Love it good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats a strong ending, this poem is very well written and good language skills. well done x