Thats a strong ending, this poem is very well written and good language skills. well done x

Love it good job

It's sweet.. I like it very much yet i don't agree with u on 1thing: u say that love doesn't last, but i believe that love never ends in case it was real love.. Ur a great writer؛‎ ‎keep up with the good work.:)

Your feelings really come across on this one.. I especiallylike the ending .. =+)