Goodbye my love

by Always and Never   Sep 25, 2007


This is goodbye my love,
I'll be the first one to let go.
But before I just leave,
There's a few things you should know.

I truly do love you,
With all my heart and more.
But I can't handel the way you keep playing me!
Baby... I'm torn!

You say I'm kin of crazy,
But love makes you do crazy things,
I've done all I can do to make you happy.
Don't you ever stop to think?

Think of how much I love you,
I'm not overly obsessed.
The little things I do to make you mad,
Are just my little tests!

Tests to see if i matter,
To the one that matters most to me,
I'm not trying to push you away my love.
I'm just trying to make you see!

Make you see how much you mean,
To my pathetic life!
I thought love would come easy.
I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

So now this is the end,
To what I have to say.
If you truly do care about me.
Don't let me slip away!

I love you Eli!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Sorry i have to tell you about that stanza
    Make you see how much you mean,
    To my pathetic life!
    I thought love would come easy.
    I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

    what a sad piece you have put here. i realy feel the pain and aswell true love ebhind the feelings. you are such a talented writer.. and sorry for triple comments i dont know how it happend...

    anyhow i loved your poem cuz it makes me think about someone to who i loved. great great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Make you see how much you mean,
    To my pathetic life!
    I thought love would come easy.
    I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Make you see how much you mean,
    To my pathetic life!
    I thought love would come easy.
    I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Make you see how much you mean,
    To my pathetic life!
    I thought love would come easy.
    I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    Great write. i understand how you feel.
    if you need to talk im here.