Great write. i understand how you feel.
if you need to talk im here.

Make you see how much you mean,
To my pathetic life!
I thought love would come easy.
I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

Make you see how much you mean,
To my pathetic life!
I thought love would come easy.
I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

Make you see how much you mean,
To my pathetic life!
I thought love would come easy.
I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

Sorry i have to tell you about that stanza
Make you see how much you mean,
To my pathetic life!
I thought love would come easy.
I didnt know it was all pain and strife!

what a sad piece you have put here. i realy feel the pain and aswell true love ebhind the feelings. you are such a talented writer.. and sorry for triple comments i dont know how it happend...

anyhow i loved your poem cuz it makes me think about someone to who i loved. great great poem