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by Wings Of Flames Sep 25, 2007 category : Friendship, family / goodbye
I know it's been there, My mind starts to race, Minute after minute, I start to fall from space, Aching in my heart, The stars start to weep, In everlong darkness, We shall find our sleep, I can't focus now, My soul drags in pain, The tears suffocate me, Please start again, I want to know it's okay, That the roses won't die, I need to hold on to this, Because everyday I cry.
by Kalee
This is a really good poem. The flow and wording was wonderful. I really liked the line "the stars start to weep". It sounds so sad and yet beautiful. 5/5 Kalee
by rain
I love this poem i also like the part where it says "the stars start to weep" nice job 5/5