That was really good.. keep it up

Awww, thats sooo well written and has excellent flow, well done xxxxx

This is amazing...I have no words to express the feeling I had by reading your poem.You're very talented so don't stop writing because you are doing a great job.Congratulations and take good care of you.
5/5 For sure
*hugs*

That was great

This is what I think to myself everyday... you captured a person who actaully exists. Very well written, I have no criticism, great job

Wow..
amazing write,caught the wrods outta my mouth on paper.
keep it up!
-Lisa

I like the imagery in it. It is an awesome poem.

An extremely powerful poem you have here. I like the style of it, and the vocab is definately strong in this piece. The descriptions created such detailed imagery and captured my attention the whole way through.
Most of all, I love the last two lines, as well as the title. That is what made me want to read this poem. It really caught my eye.
Another amazing poem.
5/5

Tammie

I like this. my fav part is

Hurt to many times, always left so lonely and blue
Wasted countless tears, feeling she couldn't continue

i can relate to this one alot. u done a nice job. i raate this a 5

That was great.. The last two lines were my favorite..
They were a nice closing lines.. those two lines really brought the whole poem together.
It was a great poem all n' all.
keep it up.

xoxo
--Chelsey

Such a sad story in a poem, but the flow was super in this, one of your best. So real an true brilliant piece of work xxx alex xxx

I loved the first two lines they grabbed my attention and kept me reading the whole thing, it flowed well and i really liked it!!
keep it up

xx

Perfect write

Well there wasnt just one part of this that i liked more than the others its all so good. I enjoyed reading this although its very sad. everyone has hard times, but the hardest are trying to pull yourself back up after you fall. Great Job!
~*Whit*~

Great write (once again) great flow strong emotion great work keep it up

Great poem and vey well written. It was sad to read though.

Wow the last two lines were my favourite by far. It wrapped up the poem but it also connected the poem to the title that you picked. Nice job. Usually I don't like poems with couplets but this one was very nicely done. You made each stanza powerful enough to stand on its own but also smooth enough to connect to the rest of the poem. The only criticism I have is that rhyme scheme is a little off. From what I can tell the rhyming is supposed to be aa, bb, cc, dd, etc and it works but when I got to the sixth stanza it got disrupted. I liked that stanza but I feel if you make those two lines rhyme it will make the poem sound better overall. But besides that everything else was really good it caught my attention and kept it.