Silent Cries Of The Purest Heart (Double Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Sep 25, 2007


Alone in the dark, acid tears silently fall
As an innocent heart splits into two
Recalling when it had everything, it had it all
Alone in the dark, acid tears silently fall
A frozen soul that can no longer stand tall
Wholesome heart wondering if it can continue
Alone in the dark, acid tears silently fall
As an innocent hearts splits into two.

No one seeming to hear these broken tears
Coming from a lonely, fragile heart
Used to be so whole, now laced with fears
No one seeming to hear these broken tears
World has gone temporarily deaf, it never hears
The once purest heart has cracked apart
No one seeming to hear these broken tears
Coming from a lonely, fragile heart.

**For A Contest**

Triolet-Consists of 8 lines.
The 1st, 4th, and 7th line repeat.
The 2nd and 8th line repeat as well.
The rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    I love your use of the words 'acid' and 'laced' Creating a very toxic, addicting, and still somehow bitterly sweet peice of poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was good I liked the flow and the subject matter was apparent. You were disiplined on the stanza thats good but, I guess I don't do too well with structure good job Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    A well written Triolet, really well elaborated and expressed easy to read and well written xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, I really like triolets, but I know they're not particularly easy to do, but you made this look so easy. A very sad and touching poem. Excellent work, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    "Used to be so whole, now laced with fears
    No one seeming to hear these broken tears
    World has gone temporarily deaf, it never hears
    The once purest heart has cracked apart
    No one seeming to hear these broken tears
    Coming from a lonely, fragile heart."
    ^^ my favorite part.
    The whole poem was good but thats the part that i really understood.
    The poem and the words were very strong, alot of emotion behind it.
    I've read some of your other poems.. their all very good. You have a wonderful talent.. Keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

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