by Baby Rainbow
Strong worded poem, good talent xx |
by Chelsey
"Used to be so whole, now laced with fears |
by Wallace
Amazing, I really like triolets, but I know they're not particularly easy to do, but you made this look so easy. A very sad and touching poem. Excellent work, 5/5 |
A well written Triolet, really well elaborated and expressed easy to read and well written xxx alex xxx |
by Robert
This was good I liked the flow and the subject matter was apparent. You were disiplined on the stanza thats good but, I guess I don't do too well with structure good job Plot121 |
I love your use of the words 'acid' and 'laced' Creating a very toxic, addicting, and still somehow bitterly sweet peice of poetry. |