by Independence Forever Sep 25, 2007
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
America is crumbling don't you see? |
Excellant job dave it could of ended better though. great poem |
by Katie
To what time are you comparing today with? |
by Becky
This poem is so true, unfortunately. The sad thing is most peopel don't realize it yet and are still livnig in yesterday. Great poem, amazing talent. Keep writing, 5/5 |