Great poem. Really wearing your heart on your sleeve with this poem, i really enjoyed it!
"There's nothing more worth holding
Than your precious, darkened form;
A conclusion that's controlling
All emotions being born."
Fantastic lines! (^^ ,)
5/5

Oh, wow, greatly written love poem, I love it! It is amazing from the beginning to the end, with excellent wording and fantastic flow. You did superb job with rhymes, they're not typical which is great.
My favorite stanza is:

-Your eyes inflamed suspicions
Of the passions in our mind,
While Love's sweet inhibitions
And our weakness was combined.-

You expressed emotions through brilliant descriptions into the whole piece.
Truly excellently done, 5/5 from me