by Tracy D Rollings Sep 25, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I think of all the things |
by Espoirfailed
I love poems that have a story that is obviously personal to the writer and the reader is left wanting to understand it more. |
by she
Oh,so buetiful, do wish life was simple again, 5/5 |
Wow this is a remarkable tale...very thought provoking. It flowed very nicely and I must say I was 100% engrossed in your poetic story from the first word to the last...I believe your title choice was perfect too. excellent job on this one. oh by the way you country boy "Things that my grandmother done" should be Things that my grandmother did. all in all good work 5/5 |
by OHgreenman
This piece really grabbed me!! Brought back memories of my grandmother and the secrets that she would share with me. If only now was as simple as back then...this piece just rocked from beginning to end!! |
Tracy, you always have this crazy skill of telling a story in every thing that you write..and its always..refreshing, your work never grows old, amazing work on this one, keep it up! |