This was Beautofully written yet so sad. The imagery was so sad it made me cry.
Take care
Love, Tara-Kay
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I loved the imagery you portrayed in this..created very vivid pictures in my mind. flow was good throughout for the most part and the whole piece screamed out with depth and emotion..nicely done.

This is a beautifully written piece, i love the way you portray the story through the piece, it tells so much in so few words.
DnB

This was so emotional and great
Keep up the great work
I aspire to write as well as you

- mello