Hi avan, im glad i got to read another poem by you after almost two months..... it was a great one with a great meaning, i can say it must be you who is so nice that is why others care about you as well, this shows your great feelings and emotions in the same time that can make a person cry yet give them smile, smile of happiness as you can see and that is what makes you great because if you were not nice and great you would never open your eyes and see where is reality hidden.

again, i really liked this one and out of this short poem i am writing almost a page of summery,lol........
keep it up i want to read more from my favorite poet.

Wow,
this gave me chill, i love the way you are admiting a guilt , and it is loveable as this expain how nice a person can be. indeed this was fantastic and almost made me cry as in my life i had a similar person but i could not see until one day i woke up and he was not there anymore, i am glad you see it before it is late and i hope that person accept this great poem. as my story go, all i can do is shed the tears of regrat.