Heya this is an amazing poem
i love how you write
it is just soo hmm dark and stuff
really love it
it is real good
hope to read more sometime

keenan

Amazed, again... Wow. Totally breathtaking poem, your descriptions in it are absolutely superb, they create so unique and vivid imagery, every line is simply brilliant. I love your word, you have amazing way with words, so original and creative. I can't say which part of the poem I like the best, whole piece is excellent.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

This is really good and interesting! I give it a 5/5!! Great Job. Come check out some of my poems if you would like!

Wowawiouw.. Amazing, ahh it's just so pure and incredible, how amazing imagery you have and make all sound soft and loveable same time, incredible. Your wording is excellent. very unique piece!
A perfect poem the way it is.

5/5 But this piece surely deserves more!

First off, thank you for both of your comments.
I really liked them.
Secondly, this poem was truyl amazing.
Keep up the great writing.
5/5
-Heather

This beautiful poem took my breath away. Amazing flow of words and superbly penned expression of love... Lovely details and such a captivating read.. This poem is breathtakingly touching... The depth of emotions expressed is so poignant and astounding...

An enchanting read. 5/5!

WOW. The only poem that's left ME speechless Keep writing YOU'RE a NATURAL

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