This was great, not only was it well formatted but the most important thing is you're breaking new ground, turning away from your usual style of writing. it feels great don't it?

your servant:
david

Interesting.

I think the majority of us are too naive, selfish, and careless to care enough for the world. i think in the end we're driving ourselves to total apocolypse. i'm glad you care enough to write poems that can open peoples eyes and slap some sense into their thinking katy. thanks for this one. 5 always.