Comments : The Essential Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Twobit

    I like how you describe love in this poem. The flow is fantastic! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    I think It was beautiful. Deep and had a soft sound to it. Really amazed. I don't understand how it's rating is so down. Raw emotions just aaah beautiful!
    5/5 defently

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Well, once again I wasn't too fond of the rhyming. BUT, it was better than the last.
    I want you to know, that when I say I don't like your rhyming style I'm not 'doggin' your poetry. Your poetry is amazing, I love it. Just not the rhyming.

    Plus, I'm not good at comments.
    You get what I think, to a point.
    I can't say what's good about it, I'm bad at that.
    But, I can tell you a million things wrong with one poem.
    Lol. :|
    Sorry.

    I'm honest though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was different and a really interesting read. I loved the ending, it was beautiful. Well done. *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    You wrote about love in your poem,
    "Love is more than romance
    for there are others of significance". This part explains a lot about the meaning of love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    So cute!!

    "Give love your might
    and keep it all right
    so there's no fright
    day or night."

    I loved the last stanza. Summed everything up perfectly!
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by gack60

    Nice work!! raw words straight from the heart

    nice structure and flow

    well done

    5/5

    Gary.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow this is really soo beautiful.... it explains love in such a simple yet powerful way.
    I guess this is the first time I've ever read one like this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    Well Written!Worth the time!Made a fluster of emotions;exactly what a poet wants to do!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sage

    Lovely!
    i like this very much!

  • 17 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Amazing!
    you have truly captured the idea of love...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    This poem is awesome i love it .i love the meaning behind it, which i would like to point out my fave part which is"Love is more than romance
    for other hands hold significance." i have to say i agree with these words there so true...keep writing!!!....=) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    Hmmm..... The wording was a little strange. Sometimes it didn't make sense, but other times was good! I liked it, but it could use some work. But I have no right to judge it really, it was what you wanted it to be, and that's enough! :)

    ~*~Alex~*~