by Malboros pipe Sep 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Heartbreak and loneliness are feelings, |
I like the first few lines how you talk about heartache and loneliness and how they've only hit you twice before. Kind of like you know thats a lot but more is surely coming. I thought it was a bit short but the flow and rhymes saved you haha 5/5 nice job |
by Nula
Amazing poem...i like it |