by Malboros pipe Sep 26, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Divinity of an unborn son, |
I didn't think the first 3 stanza's were quite as good as the last. I think you described people pretty good. We're like an ocean on the surface our emotions all look the same but underneath you could never really know..... It's easy to hide behind a smile. Nicely done 5/5 |
by Jackie
Very dark meaningful poem, well written 5/5 |