His breath warm against her neck,
Trying hard to resist the temptation
As her blood sings a beautiful tune.
She kisses his ice cold lips...
Maybe this will save her life tonight.
Will this burning desire they hold for one another win out,
Will her life be saved tonight?
His body hard as marble, cold as death,
His skin a ghostly white.
No desire to leave but knowing he must.
Her life is in danger but she doesn't care,
She is mortal, after all....
Pale skin, long dark hair, big brown eyes,
Its more than her blood that appeals to him,
She wants to be with him forever,
And she knows how
But he wont allow it!
How long can he ignore her beautifully sang song?
How long until she finally wins and joins him in immortality forever?
*Okay so i read one too many vampire stories but i only really wrote this cause it popped into my mind during a extremely long and boring english class... I hope it sounded alright....*
Nice write... and yes... its obvious you like vampires.
very well written... could have had a little touch ups here and there... but still i'd give it a 5/5
keep it up kiddo
