Voices

by Emily   Sep 26, 2007


The Voices..
They won't stop
They say to kill more
Like when they said to kill that little girl next door..
When i kill the voices go away
but not for long..

I must stop it!
But how!?
They will never stop!
And I'll never stop killing
Their pounding in my head!

Stop!
STOP IT!!!
I must end it
And i must end it now!
I didn't mean any harm

But the voices wouldn't stop!
I have to make them stop!!
But now it's my turn..
I'll set it right

With one bullet
With one bang
With one hold in my head
With one gun

Bang!

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  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Nice! (Not the message of a crazy person killing themself but the poem... *if that made sense*)

    It had a real impact on me...
    i was like
    woah
    i didnt actually expect that ending!!!

    Great Job

  • 17 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    Wow, this poem is written really well. It is insanely dark, but also very sad and meaningful. I'd probably put it into the dark/fantasy section, but it could go either way. There is a fine line between darkness and depression :P 5/5 keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Wow, this is really good, maybe belongs in dark/ dark, horror. think this is more dark and twisted than sad and depression. but i liked reading it and think its a great poem. :) 5/5!

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