Wow, this is really good, maybe belongs in dark/ dark, horror. think this is more dark and twisted than sad and depression. but i liked reading it and think its a great poem. :) 5/5!

Wow, this poem is written really well. It is insanely dark, but also very sad and meaningful. I'd probably put it into the dark/fantasy section, but it could go either way. There is a fine line between darkness and depression :P 5/5 keep writing

Nice! (Not the message of a crazy person killing themself but the poem... *if that made sense*)

It had a real impact on me...
i was like
woah
i didnt actually expect that ending!!!

Great Job