I find this poem refreshingly realistic and it paints a very vivid picture in my mind.
I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i did reading it. Great job.
I particularily liked this stanza;

Strolling through the door hours later
As the "I missed you," lie spills from your lips
Staring into your coffee brown eyes
Losing focus, I'm slowly starting to slip

I think it makes a good scene.

G/A

Oh PS:
5/5 :P lol

I saw this whole poem like a movie, a flash in my mind. It was maturely written. This poem, superior to the other poem I read. Deserves all my 5 rep.

[Voted 5].

_Sam

I saw this whole poem like a movie, a flash in my mind. It was maturely written. This poem, superior to the other poem I read. Deserves all my 5 rep.

[Voted 5].

_Sam

This poem gave me shivers, to even think my boyfriend may leave me and do that makes me sick. It must have done its job though. really good work xxx alex xxx