I think that poem was really good..... i dunno why peaople won't read it..... keep it up u done a really great job

This poem really re-enforces the frustration that happens in some relationships. The repetition makes is very relentless in the questioning, much like someone is thinking.
Great job. Keep it up.

G/A

No I have not thought about killing myself lol i wouldn't do no matter how much I loved someone! I really like this poem it reminds me of a ex boyfriend who I thought really liked me turns out he was going with my best mate but oh well! My ex-boyfriend also really hurt me yesterday but I guess i'll find someone special one day..x

I liked this alot. I look forward to seeing wat u write next.

Excellent Job!!

Pretty personal stuff you got there. i like it! 5/5

Aw thanks so much for the comment! made my day! yeah, i really like this one, most definetly.
you've got a gift.

Well done on this one i liked it!!!!

This poem seems to drag along a lot. I understand the concept but all and all I feel it lagged way too much for me Plot121

Nice poem, sadly I find myself asking these same questions and ending up going right back with the person ><. Nice poem. = )

Hey big sis. i love this poem. wonderful!
*5/5 all the way.*
ILY KRISTINA! lol
xoxo,
[=mackenzie.layne<3
[aka ur little sister]

WoW!!
Excellent work... I like it...
My favorite lines are "Why do I keep coming back to you? "

keep up this good work :)

Awwww...I'm sorry...it's a confusing world isn't it?