I miss you..dedicated to chad..my god bro

by ChezziieePopszz xGHETTO GIRLx   Sep 26, 2007


He passed away coz of someone dumb
Who thought he would be a smarty bum
It is his dad im talking about
But yet his dad still lives in doubt
Just sitting there believing his lies
While the rest of his family non-stop cries

I hate his dad so furking much
I miss chads voice
And his friendly touch

He was the sweetest boy i ever knew
Everytime i think of his dad
I want to spew

Why do all my family die so young
i can tell you now its no furking fun
now all i want is a gun
to the head
yay now im dead

i wish it was that easy
when i see his dad i smile cheesy
when all i really want to do
is show him how it feels to be kill'd
like he did to his son
now wouldn't that be fun

He was only 7 years old
he had a heart of pure gold
it's about time his dad got told
why the f**k can't i let go

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  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Sorry about that i left a comment for the wrong person but this poem was good

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Very sweet i wish i could say that to my dad, i wrote a poem to him to

  • 17 years ago

    by ChezziieePopszz xGHETTO GIRLx

    Hey hey alex thx for the tip..ill be sure to get some good tips off yu on my next poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Hey, i think this is a really good attempt of a good poem. However your first two lines are a bit weird i think.

    He passed away coz of someone dumb
    Who thought he would be a smarty bum

    How about....

    He passed away, he lost his heart,
    Because of someone thinking they were smart.

    I think that something like that would have made this poem perfect :D xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ChezziieePopszz xGHETTO GIRLx

    Hey ppl please write a comment about this one[&&] this is about my god bro who was killed in a car explosion coz his sister told there dad not to liite a smoke coz she could smell gas so the cok..head did arghhhhhhh

    love ya all xx

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