It looks like some song, maybe that is just my opinion but it reminds me on song. This piece holds so many emotions and you was really honest. It seems that you put your self in this piece, that isn't a little thing. You described emotions on the very interesting way. Well done!

Aww, Don't turn your heart to stone Wake. Its makes it harder to make it soft again :P Yeah, I like it when I can say that I'm better off without someone. I think its better then mopping around sad wishing to still be with the person and knowing that I can't :P I found one mistake. I think you meant to write I'm instead of I'd in this line: Cause now i know that I'd fine. Other than that its perfect ^_^ 5/5 Another Excellent piece!!

This is a very good poem.
Very emotional, very deep.
Like it's your own experience..
Loved reading this piece
Take care