Remembering

by Tracy D Rollings   Sep 26, 2007


I walk the fields were we use to play
the trees that were there are all gone
nothing more left of the old barn
memories of laying by the tree alone
looking up at the clouds as the roll by
brings a joyful tear to my eye
watching the tops of the weeds and grass
dancing in the wind as it blew
reflecting visions of a wonderful pass
graceful moments I once knew
things that make you want to smile
only those you pictures in your mind
funny little things you did as a child
will forever be framed in time..©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kim

    Great poem!
    I especially like the choice of words at the end.

    Keep up the great work! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    I love this one... It gives a soothing mood of remembering one's past... A classic one... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Just beautiful!
    ...Melody..=)

  • 17 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Nice poem, I too like to write about things that evryone can relate to and "remebering" is one of those things. Very nice treatment of something we can all relate to.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    "..the trees that were there are all gone
    nothing more left of the old barn..

    ..watching the tops of the weeds and grass
    dancing in the wind as it blew.."

    loved the images you created here and how you brought them into use in the poem..simply Superb
    another Great Piece.
    Do Keep em coming.

    ~Wake~

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