I liked the theme, and how a sad tone was over the whole story, asking why this is happening. brilliant, I'm losing my best friend,so touches me deep.
Very enjoyful red.
5/5 Keep it up!

I always thought a poet has the right to write two kinds of poems one for the public and another for those he or she cares about. I always held true to one should never be shared with the public and it is my belief that this is one of those. The poem has alot of venting and sorrow that only the person you wrote it for could understand I hope you see my point Plot121

Great poem. I think anyone who's lost a friend can relate to this poem. The flow was amazing and I loved how you asked questions; that really involves the reader.

5/5

-Shannon <3

This reminds me of a friendship that I had, which she messed up on me, and it's all because of my cousin. Great job at explaining every feeling. 5/5

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