This is a very dark and chilling poem but at the same time its interesting to read. It kept my attention throughout. I tried to write a Sonnet and failed terribly and now reading your poem and seeing that you've written two, all I can say is that this is extremely impressing.

Take Care.

A call from Master is heard in the breeze
A breath of seduction tending my needs.

Dear, this was beautiful poems of dark poetry you penned here, Good imagery, Creative yet unique, one of the best from you, Love the Shakespearean style...Beautiful done!

Bert.

Jeannie,
Oh my oh my. This was great. I adore dark writes and when it involves vampires it's even better. I am a huge Anne Rice fan and it seems as though with this write you snatched her ability to chill me to the bone. As you did in this amazing write. I love these formats and styles you have been writing in although it is difficult for me to write myself. The imagery in this pulled me in and held me captive. Wonderful Job 5/5

I really liked how you managed to write a poem in this style. I like sonnets.
The storyline was very dark and creepy towards the end. Really captivating.
I enjoyed the last line. It's dark as well as romantic; a very nice combination of the two.
Good work!
5/5