by Daisy if you do Sep 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Thoughts collide in memory |
by Cooper
From start to finish, I was in a completely different world; a deliciously dark world, of course. |
by Edward D Zurovec
Ah those memories, some we hold dear, some bring nightmares, but they are who we are. Nice arrangement and I liked your use of assonance and consonance. Nicely written. |
by geeeeee
Wow, I must say that I loved the vocab and descriptive language in this poem. It flowed really well and was just absolutely brilliant. I liked the title too, it drew me into read the poem. |