Torn in two

by Melissa   Sep 26, 2007


My heart is torn in two
Between you and him
I've loved him for years
and until you cam
I swore I would forever
but now my heart is beating faster
my conscience is twisting
and my mind is reeling
reviewing and replaying
every last thing you said
the feelings I felt for you that night
are locked in my heart
remembered forever
a secret
a memory
shared between your heart and mine

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Nice write you sounded very sad, the poem lacked a little structure in the end but was still nice to read

    Grant

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Good poem. Voted 4/5