Comments : At Five In the Morning

  • 17 years ago

    by LoveBird99

    Aww, how sweet! sooo cute

  • 17 years ago

    by desigirl

    Dear sweetheart,
    From now on
    I would not need an alarm
    To wake me up
    All I have to do
    Have your picture on my hands
    Then
    My heart beats will wake me up...

    wow, i love this stanza, very origional. i can feel a big difference between this and your old ones.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Quite a different poem... m enjoyin it... keep it up...

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    That was so amazing and heartfelt, i loved it i thought it was beautiful. continue writing as you always touch the hearts of your readers.

  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Loved it dast xosh ^_^.