For you, with you, to you

I need you now
someway, somehow
I promise to find you
My word is true
Ill search high and low
through rain and through snow
Over rivers, through the trees
Ill bring my heart back to me.

Because everything I do
reminds me of you
Your soft thin hair
your hypnotizing stare
the time we spent
the love that you lent
It all comes to mind
and every morning I find
I miss you more every day
In your arms, I wish to lay
by your side, I want to stay
I need to be with you
for my passions are few.

If only you knew
how much I miss you
Id give every dime
to go back in time
to say that I love you
and a last good-bye too.

Now Im on my own
I feel so all alone
you were always there
to love and to care
but now that youre gone
I have only our song
it is all I have left
of moments that were best.

My loves not passe
its true in every way
The love that I feel
seems almost surreal
The feelings so strong
it cannot be wrong
youre what Ive wanted
so true and undaunted
pure and untainted
For this I have waited.

And for you Ill wait
The future is fate
it cannot be forced
but only endorsed.

It only hurts when I breathe
so I have to believe
that all this pain
I can sustain.
I will not let go.
Ill defend what I know.
I will not give in.
They will never win.

please tell me what you think. I'm unsure about this one.
Ill return the favor :]