Very effective, especially the ending. You expressed your emotions in a good way.
My favorite lines are:
-You turn your back and slam the door.
Salty tears spill from my eyes,
As my heart aches for your love.
But you left me out here
In the cold...
With gently falling snowflakes.-

You have great wording in the whole piece and very powerful imagery.
Keep up!

I think this is exquisitely penned! The imagery was strong, and held stinging emotion. A unique approach, a wonderful rhythm, -- overall a very powerful piece. A true pleasure to read.

Keep it up!
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N